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Bahamut 04-02-2002 12:45 PM

Hello peeps!

Now, I am starting this thread for all those peeps with artistic stuff they want to share around here! I mean it can be poems, lyrics and whatever short stories! Whatever thing that paints with words are welcome

Although now you also have to follow the rules of IW, now any material here can be tolerated (sexual, profanity, etc.) but then you have to use at your own risk- and these sensitive words are NOT to be directed to any IW member (well someone might try it) The Mods will censor those parts as they see fit so use them at your own risk. ;)

Now let's start submitting those stuff!

Oh, BTW, this thread can be the storehouse for new info, or suggestions/comments about a particular poem, story, whatever and please, do suggest! We are open here (well I am at least) to comments and suggestions... if you see anything wrong then pray do tell! :D

I'll start ont he next post... or well beat me to it! [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Bahamut 04-02-2002 12:54 PM

Well I really haven't thought of a title yet... nothing comes to mind... :(

the pressure inside
moving with life
aching with stirfe
struggling to break free
longing to see the seas
touching the warm inviting breeze
seeing the sun set quietly
it still pushes forward
makes itself feel so awkward
denies the thought and still moves forward
cannot set it back
trying all in vain not to crack
seeing itself in all eternity
but then it cannot crack
nor break free
because what is inside
is for all eternity

(Originally posted at Once Upon A Paper Forum)

SSJ4Sephiroth 04-02-2002 05:34 PM

umm... are you sure you want me to post parts of my novel here? if you are i can fix up the first few chapters and post them...

AzRaeL StoRmBlaDe 04-02-2002 07:51 PM

A thorny hand grasps
his last shred of dignity.
Hope gone forever

When the setting sun
reaches for the horizon
light fades from our hearts.

Monday time stands still.
Eternity holds its breath
waiting, still waiting. . .

African Violets
bloom in the noontime sunshine.
Why did God bring rain?

those are a few haiku i wrote

Cloudbringer 04-03-2002 09:37 PM

Great idea, Bahamut! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Lord of Alcohol 04-03-2002 09:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bahamut:
Well I really haven't thought of a title yet... nothing comes to mind... :(

the pressure inside
moving with life
aching with stirfe
struggling to break free
longing to see the seas
touching the warm inviting breeze
seeing the sun set quietly
it still pushes forward
makes itself feel so awkward
denies the thought and still moves forward
cannot set it back
trying all in vain not to crack
seeing itself in all eternity
but then it cannot crack
nor break free
because what is inside
is for all eternity

(Originally posted at Once Upon A Paper Forum)


Lord of Alcohol 04-03-2002 09:47 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Bahamut:
Well I really haven't thought of a title yet... nothing comes to mind... :(

the pressure inside
moving with life
aching with stirfe
struggling to break free
longing to see the seas
touching the warm inviting breeze
seeing the sun set quietly
it still pushes forward
makes itself feel so awkward
denies the thought and still moves forward
cannot set it back
trying all in vain not to crack
seeing itself in all eternity
but then it cannot crack
nor break free
because what is inside
is for all eternity

(Originally posted at Once Upon A Paper Forum)

I fell in love but it was forlorn
cause my love thought I was a total moron

I wanted to seal this love with a small kiss
but the bastard said

Can I drill you about this?

Krishach 04-03-2002 09:49 PM

I have a poem I wrote, but it's not on me now. I'll grab it tomorrow!

Bahamut 04-04-2002 05:20 AM

Seph: Sure! Post it chapter by chapter... ;)

Cloudy: Thanks heehee :D

LoA: Can *I* drill you about this? LOL

Krishach: go now!!! Get those poems!!! ;)


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