Writing more rubbish poetry :D which he kindly posts here for you to make of what you will ;)

Frustration
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I think therefore I am?
No, I am ergo I think.
Still I'm fixed in space and time,
with ideas beyond the brink.

What I say is no good,
What I do is not enough.
So alone here I'm stood,
And my outlook is rough.

Now my options are few,
So I should grin and bear it.
But then what can I do,
When my voice has no merit?

Ode to the Owed
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How shiny is what you offer,
With lines and gimmicks you proffer.
No worry for the future you say,
Except of how to repay!

Nce poetism tainly!! Ever hear rudy say some of his poetry? I don't think he likes to post it though. :/

Good Poems There Tainly!!! [img]smile.gif[/img] Nice Work!

Thanks for the compliments folks [img]smile.gif[/img] no I don't think I've ever heard Rudy's stuff, maybe we should encourage him to post it ?

Last night I wrote this, so here goes:

I lie here awake and alone,
Thinking of you or anyone.
There's a void here I know,
But that feeling won't go,
Still I lie here awake and alone.

I lie here awake and alone,
As at night it's the worst,
And in the morning too,
Still my mind turns to you,
And I lie here awake and alone.

I lie here awake and alone,
Searching for reasons and answers,
With no solution I know,
and no answers will flow,
So I lie here awake and alone.

Bravo, Sir Tainly! Silly? Nah, but your poems made me a little sad :(

Hope things are ok with you!

Owed, did make me laugh, though! [img]smile.gif[/img]

Yes, we need to encourage Rudy to post some of his poems, he really needs to post some more [img]tongue.gif[/img] , Ah, I remember the ol' days of him posting his poetry [img]tongue.gif[/img]

Sorry to hear that Cloudy, but I get my motivation from how I feel..which is not so good of late, but if things change so will the poems :D

Rudy, if ya readin' this..get some poems up here now I order it ;) :D

Thank you for sharing these with us, Simon: sometimes a reminder that one is not the only one having a hard time is not such a bad thing. Even though I would of course prefer if we could both be united in joy.

And you are a true friend.

Guido

[ 05-18-2002, 03:21 PM: Message edited by: Ramon de Ramon y Ramon ]

Simon, nice poetry! Sorry it's born of you feeling down though :(

Hope things start looking up for you soon - they almost always do IMO [img]smile.gif[/img]