Thread: A story I wrote(would like a critical analysis)
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Old 06-17-2001, 05:27 AM   #4
DarkPiper
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Are you looking for any particular kind of criticism?

I'm pretty good at catching grammatical errors and dangling clauses; plot holes and characters not being in character takes a little longer.

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