Sorry, guys, was away for a bit. SC, I'd *love* you to do that. It's only a first draft anyway. I'm currently rather busy with another story (ALSB-KFA conflict), but when I'm done I'll continue this. Avatar, my English is good because I used to live in the US and still read tons of English books. My spoken English is no longer the best, but my written has stayed the same.
BUMP! I want more replies!
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