[Stormymystic]

Here is another one i just wrote, please tell me what you think, this is not excatly how i feel, but close

Breathless whispers

I lay down my life
by the touch of my blade
I ask for forgiveness
For the mistakes that I've made

As my blood seeps out
I beg from you all
Please do not forget me
Or let my name fall

Though the life slowly drains
I know I will soon be a blur
upon this world I shall leave
my breathless whispers

I know I have to go
but before I leave this place
please come before me
so I may look upon your face

May my breathless whispers
stir within your souls
to help you find your path
and reach your mighty goals