I must say I liked it Timber. No sugar coating. [img]graemlins/thumbsup.gif[/img] I would reconsider the "you" in "You Congressmen...." though. To him it may sound as a personal attack and lead to a simple delete. You could write "Congressmen and Senators are like children...." and still make a point. Keep all the other "you"s in the paragraph and the arow still finds its target.
Not a big deal though.
I love this part:
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I don't expect you to listen. I am sure you are as owned as every politician in that useless bureaucratic hell-hole known as D.C. But, at least I'll sleep a little better knowing I tried.
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