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08-21-2002, 03:36 PM
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Zhentarim Guard
 Join Date: July 24, 2002
Location: Arm's length from my monitor.
Age: 35
Posts: 367
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I hate poetry and i have never made a poem that took more than 2 min. to think up but here goes...
"Sarevok" O poor, poor Sarevok he lost his love, killed in the Iron Throne, up up above, So the anger built up inside him, to kill the Grand Dukes was his whim, but along came that warrior who had killed his love, high in that tower, up up above, And because of that warrior just and true, Sarevoks dreams lost their shape and away they flew He lost his life, poor poor Sarevok, While all the gods stared and gawked... ummmmm.... -Brainless One [ 08-21-2002, 06:02 PM: Message edited by: Brainless One ] |
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08-21-2002, 06:02 PM
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Quintesson
 Join Date: August 7, 2002
Location: Oakville (next to the T.O.), Ontario, Canada
Age: 36
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Good Job! Sounds pretty good, you just need to work on the ending...
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08-21-2002, 06:04 PM
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Zhentarim Guard
Join Date: July 24, 2002
Location: Arm's length from my monitor.
Age: 35
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Yeah i know it sucks, dont know what else though
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